This is a story about the life of a Fraternity Brother trying to get through college, and there duties with in being in a Fraternity and also handling school work, a job, and many other obstacles in life. Being in a fraternity or what some people call a “frat” is great, you meet amazing people who have huge amount of connections after college for jobs and even during college for summer internships. People have many opinions about fraternities, saying that all they do is party, and be complete idiots, but to be honest that is not true at all, not even close. Scholarship is a huge part in Fraternities, it is what fuels the brothers to succeed in college and life in general. The next is Community, being a brother of a fraternity you are able to help the community in many different ways, philanthropy events are a great way to get involved with the community. What’s great about greek life is you have many resources at your disposal and you have over 50 brothers or sisters to rely on.
April 8, 2017 at 9:17 pm
Telling the story of a frat is an interesting challenge. It might help to focus on a specific character. In a conventional narrative, the protagonist meets an obstacle or challenge, then a crisis, which changes him/her. Who or what changes in the story? Can you cluster a set of changes that frat life brings into a single day and show how this changes the protagonist? Can you add other images that could indicate this change? What is the plot? What happens that causes a change? How can you find a thread that would show this?
You might also consider some visual choices that unify the images…all b/w, or all contain hands in motion, or something to tie them together?
Satisfactory, but could use more focus